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AOSC flyer

Post by atl » Mon Apr 02, 2012 3:08 pm

I did this today on Microsoft processor and I didn't know how to upload from processor so I printed and took a picture it's just a rough draft. Please comment saying what I could improve on.

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Re: AOSC flyer

Post by PRincess » Mon Apr 02, 2012 3:19 pm

Looks good and basic. Could use some punctuation corrections.
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Re: AOSC flyer

Post by Avenger » Mon Apr 02, 2012 3:25 pm

Well, there's a "C" in scenario. Also, I think the "elite" part might send the wrong message. Same goes for the Confederate Flag. You should just use our circle logo.
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Re: AOSC flyer

Post by atl » Mon Apr 02, 2012 3:31 pm

Avenger wrote:Well, there's a "C" in scenario. Also, I think the "elite" part might send the wrong message. Same goes for the Confederate Flag. You should just use our circle logo.
fixed scenario I'll change the elite thing and consider changing the AOSC logo to the circle one thanks
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Re: AOSC flyer

Post by atl » Mon Apr 02, 2012 3:34 pm

jrleonard wrote:Looks good and basic. Could use some punctuation corrections.
Put in punctuation
Avenger wrote:Well, there's a "C" in scenario. Also, I think the "elite" part might send the wrong message. Same goes for the Confederate Flag. You should just use our circle logo.
fixed scenario, I took out elite and put in only and considering changing the AOSC logo to the circle one. thanks
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Re: AOSC flyer

Post by Romba » Mon Apr 02, 2012 5:37 pm

Wording is a bit... odd? How about something like "Come and join us at one of our many upcoming games at a field near you"
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Re: AOSC flyer

Post by atl » Mon Apr 02, 2012 6:07 pm

yes thank you
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Re: AOSC flyer

Post by SteevoLS » Mon Apr 02, 2012 7:18 pm

The AOSC isn't the only airsoft group in South Carolina, and we're an organization (not association). You could say I'm arguing semantics, but it bears mentioning.
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Re: AOSC flyer

Post by atl » Mon Apr 02, 2012 7:20 pm

I will change that also do you know how to put a publisher file on here?
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Re: AOSC flyer

Post by Echo1 Operator » Mon Apr 02, 2012 7:31 pm

sweet. i'm going to post these up at my AA meetings
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Re: AOSC flyer

Post by atl » Mon Apr 02, 2012 7:38 pm

AA?
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Re: AOSC flyer

Post by Romba » Mon Apr 02, 2012 7:59 pm

Let me google that for you. http://bit.ly/HJJVpD
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Re: AOSC flyer

Post by atl » Tue Apr 03, 2012 12:59 pm

any more suggestions
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Re: AOSC flyer

Post by Avenger » Tue Apr 03, 2012 4:05 pm

We still aren't an association, otherwise it's pretty awesome, if colorless.
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Re: AOSC flyer

Post by jesus_freak » Tue Apr 03, 2012 10:56 pm

I would probably not use "woodsball" as a game type... It's pretty clearly derived from paint-"ball"

and only because I can forsee it, "Woodsoft" is no bueno tambien.

maybe "Outdoor Games" .. idk.
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